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bonzai2904 Mon Jun 29, 2009 5:49 pm

A Summers Breeze

The Monarch rides the summer's breeze
darting, dancing to and fro
No apparent goal, no direct path
Until it reaches the the brightest flower to taste the nectar of success.

We too float on destiny's breezes
Our dreams the unseen map
They carry us to life's success
To those we love and who love us.

David Burdick – June 2009

I have submitted 3 for the contest...thnaks...Dave